TAO LIN

8/10/2005

joy williams (fiction)

there's an article from canada that's called
Writer not as bent as her characters
in it it says,
When novelist Thomas McGuane met fellow writer Joy Williams his parting comment was, "I thought you would be more twisted."

"I was heartbroken I had disappointed him," Williams recalls. "I thought I should have been more twisted at our meeting." In fact, Williams, who reads from her latest short story collection, Escapes, tonight at 8 at the Premiere Dance Theatre, 207 Queens Quay W., is an extremely pleasant individual, without a hint of any major psychological disorders.
i like joy williams because she is funny

i don't really expect anymore to learn anything about existence from reading or from anything really

i don't 'trust' any writer who has aspirations to 'teach' anyone or to 'prove' anything

i think joy williams has gotten less rhetorical and more funny over time

she has changed, over time, book to book, like a real person

State of Grace (novel, 1973)

her first novel was nominated for the national book award

it felt to me like something written straight through without any revisions

i got to page two hundred something and couldn't focus anymore and gave it i think to the housing works, in a bag, with some other books i didn't finish

The Changeling (novel, 1978)

i haven't read this

i want to

but i think it went immediately out of print or something (because of bad reviews maybe, see below) and so i can't find it, have never seen it in any used bookstore (the only books by joy williams i've seen in unused bookstores are The Quick and the Dead and Honored Guest)
Her worst experience was the reception of her second novel, a work termed "startlingly bad" by a reviewer [i think anatole broyard] for the New York Times.

"That book was just destroyed. It was an awful experience. I continued to write stories, but it took me a long time before I ventured out with a novel again. I felt at the time that some of the reviewers wanted me to die. They just wanted me to stop writing. They were saying, 'We have other writers out there who we have to deal with and all the writers yet unborn, so please go away.'"
Taking Care (stories, 1982)

half the stories still feel State of Grace-y in an unrevised way

the other half of the stories are colloquial (in a loose, childish, unpretentious way), are funny and strange; have clear scenes with dialogue; and some even end in sort of epiphanies, but a kind of epiphany where so little--nothing, pretty much--is realized that that, the blankness and vaguness of realization, itself is the epiphany: that actually there will be no more epiphanies, ever, in the future, starting now

the only story she ever gets in the new yorker, Summer, is in here

i think the new yorker is afraid of joy williams

Breaking and Entering (novel, 1988)

she started to 'allow' herself to be funny with this novel, i think

or rather started to allow herself even more to be funny

ignore these last two sentences, i think

she gets further away from her State of Grace abstractness/dreaminess here; almost the entire novel is told in a conversational, unmetaphorical, unabstract prose

the second to last story in Taking Care, Breakfast, is inside of this novel, near the beginning, revised a little

here's some of that story, a part i think is funny and typical of joy williams:
[Liberty's mother phones Liberty early one morning]

"I had a terrible dream about penguins tonight, Liberty."

"Penguins are nice, Mother. They don't do anyone any harm."

"There were hundreds of penguins on this beautiful beach and they were standing so straight, like they do, like children wearing little aprons."

[...]

"That sounds nice, Mother. It sounds sort of cheerful."

"They were being clubbed to death, Liberty. They were all being murdered by an unseen hand."
Escapes (stories, 1990)

the stories in here were written during the time that the 'kmart realists,' or 'minimalists' were, it seemed, 'in power'

five of these stories were in best american short stories ('78 '85 '86 '87 '90), chosen by ann beattie, raymond carver, anne tyler, someone else, and i think richard ford

one, 'rot,' won an o'henry prize ('88)

they are almost all about death and are almost all funny

they are written in odd, sometimes awkward, and sometimes even ungrammatical (but endearingly so), childlike prose

michiko kakutani said:
"Several of the stories in ''Escapes'' awkwardly strain to find a metaphor for their characters' lives: a rusting, rotting car becomes a symbol for a couple's deteriorating marriage in ''Rot''; and in ''Health'' an adolescent girl's glimpse of a menacing stranger becomes a symbol of all the frightening realities she will soon face in grown-up life."
* for an entire thing on 'kmart realism' that i wrote (that continues from the above kakutani quote) and then deleted, scroll down to the end of this post; it's there, along with another footnote-y thing

The Quick and the Dead (novel, 2000)

this was nominated for the pulitzer prize, michael chabon won

joy williams changes here again

the language is now childlike, colloquial, affected, and metaphorical

there is also the old State of Grace denseness of prose here, but now it is less dense than just dense-with-meaning; and now there is always a scene that is happening; a location, characters talking, moving around

[the following quotes are from bookworm, the radio show, 1/01, where michael silverblatt talks to joy williams about The Quick and the Dead]

on after both her parents died, when she was fifty, before she wrote The Quick and the Dead:
my faith, it wasn't tested, so much, as uh, it was, uh--everything dropped away, and i seemed to be living a very--i saw everything the way it was, uh, for quite some time, and the way everything is is terrifically depressing, if not horrifying... uhm... death is supposed to, for a person of faith, ehm... one can accomodate it, i mean Tolstoy in his, his what--in his readings and reflections on life, and god, and death, saying that death--that dead people DON'T go away
on (if the novel is supposed to ask the question, 'how do we live?') if there is any one figure in the novel who knows better than anyone else:
well, i don't think there is one, and think maybe that is why people feel uneasy about the going on--the goings on here
this is her funniest book, i think

this and her next one

Honored Guest (stories, 2004)

the language in here is simple and childlike and concrete, this is her funniest book to me, and i reread it the most

death is given no more 'weight' or 'importance' than anything else

people often call joy williams odd, strange, bizarre

but really joy williams is just seeing things clearly, as they are, without preconception (as a child does; as someone who enters the world from another world would); without distraction; without politics, culture, religion, identity, race, nationality, taboo, beliefs, opinions, appearances, etc.

[the following quote is from bookworm, 2/05; where they talk about Honored Guest]
i somehow want fiction to stand up and do more, but i guess all fiction can do is to just show the anamalous in life, and, uh, startle--startle the reader into realizing that life isn't as simple as it seems
...at about 20:45 into the interview michael silverblatt cuts off joy williams as she is talking; it's blatant and embarrassing

and even while joy williams--expecting silverblatt to realize that he is cutting her off, i guess--continues to talk, herself now trailing off a little, michael silverblatt remains oblivious and keeps on talking loudly and embarrassing everyone

but then joy williams cuts michael silverblatt off at about 21:05 to make a joke about kant going to a nightclub

then later she makes a joke and they both laugh and then later both she and michael silverblatt laugh really loudly and for a noticeably long time about how she, joy williams, does not know the rules of the game or how to play the game, the game being 'writing'

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* people who 'don't get' joy williams or raymond carver or frederick barthelme or amy hempel or whoever, i've noticed, usually interpret the things that happen in stories firstly, and most importantly, as metaphorical or symbolic, as representative of something else, something that the author is trying to say, like a message, or theme

i think that most or all of the 'kmart realists' have said, or will say, if you ask them, that their stories do not have messages, themes, or symbols; that they just are what they are; which is similar (not in a bad way; not in a good way) to the way someone might tell a friend a story, in real life

i wonder if those who 'don't get it' (including Madison Smartt Bell, who wrote an essay 'against' 'minimalists') also interpret things in real life as metaphorical or symbolic or thematic

sometimes i tell someone a story that i think is funny or amusing and that really happened and they say 'i don't get it' or 'what's the point?' and i think that these may be the same people who 'don't get' joy williams, carver, etc.

do some people think about their day, their actual day in real life, and say to themselves things like, 'i ate two hamburgers to symbolize my two years in jail, and then to continue the theme of two, i stayed up until 2 a.m., and the digital clock that i didn't purchase at the store (that has no name because i refuse to date my real life) was a metaphor: i was shunning the idea of technology...'

to answer myself, yes; some people do do that, i think that is okay

i have never read an essay in which a 'kmart realist' criticizes and devalues and dismisses the work of a writer who uses symbols, who is a 'maximalist,' allegorist, etc., or any other kind of writer

and among the writers who have criticized, devalued, etc. the 'kmart realists' (** see the end of this post for quotes of 'kmart realists' 'defending themselves') are tom wolfe, frederick busch, cynthia ozick ("Less remains less. I feel very deprived. So many short-story writers are depriving themselves of the amplitude of language - both intellectually and lyrically. I don't know whether it's minimalism or incapacity. There is so little on the page that you can't make the judgment. It's data. It's menu prose. There's no wit in it, no joy in it, there's no sympathy."), madison smartt bell, and some others i think

which shows, to me, that cynthia ozick, etc, lack a certain kind of understanding (that people are different), and lacking this kind of understanding is harmful; is, really, a lack of tolerance for other ways of thinking, a prejudice, a kind of ongoing and strengthening untruth that is what many of the 'kmart realists' (uncertain, not-so confident, low self-esteem, would never say something like this) aren't, which is partly why i like them, i think

saying 'less is less' is saying 'what it is is what it is' is saying '10,000 words is 10,000 words'

so take a collection of stories by frederick barthelme that is 200 pages, then take 200 pages of infinite jest

according to cynthia ozick, these two are the same; they are what they are

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** Ann Beattie: Why should we have pretended that K-Mart didn't exist? Why should I have pretended that no one in Vermont owns a bong?

Ann Beattie (from this):

Remember that the painters who were minimalists had a philosophy that what you see is what you get: no more, no less. But this has nothing to do with the so-called minimalist writers. Frederick Barthelme clearly believes that the whole is greater than the sum of the parts. And the reader who understands that something is unstated--sometimes tragically unstated--between the characters would have to realize the connotations, the implied complexities. Also, Frederick Barthelme is funny. Bobbie Ann Mason can be quite funny. The minimalist painters were not funny. Minimalism in painting was a term of approval. It was a way to discuss a movement that was a responsive movement to a previous movement in art: Abstract Expressionism. When critics began to talk about literature in these terms, they were using it in a pejorative sense, saying that there were empty spaces. Bad empty spaces, not good empty spaces.

Bobbie Ann Mason: The people I write about are serious about their lives. If they go to a Marty Robbins concert and stand in line to get his autograph - there are more people who do things like that than not.

Frederick Barthelme: I don't make spareness the god of all things, but it seems to me that if you intentionally understate things, you have a chance of allowing the reader's imagination to come into play.

15 Comments:

Blogger zeldafitz said...

I feel like minimalism sometimes becomes an affectation, especially with Ann Beattie. It grates and does not seem visceral. It seems too planned and deliberate without any soul or spirit, whereas Raymond Carver's stories seem like they need the minimalism to contain the painful subjects and characters. The minimalism in Carver's stories is more of a crystallization than a writerly device.

2:27 PM  
Blogger Gene said...

I'm interested in reading some Joy Williams now, particularly because of the humor.

I'm sort-of in the same camp as zeldafitz in that I just don't find Beattie's work altogether funny because the damn punchline always seems to be right there on the surface, like she's afraid someone will miss it.

2:57 PM  
Blogger Gene said...

Oh, and thanks for the posts. Very well done.

2:58 PM  
Blogger Tao Lin said...

ann beattie's first two books are different than her others; funnier and more natural-seeming, i think

her third book is almost not funny at all, ever

then she wrote the book where she tries to be funny, Love Always

that was later

and then...

um... can't think of anything else to say about that

4:46 PM  
Blogger The Man Who Couldn't Blog said...

Ripping stuff, here.

I've perused Honored Guest (after listening to that Bookworm, in fact), and enjoyed. But haven't spent enough time with Williams.

Is this odd? I discovered Williams at around the same time I discovered Marylinne Robinson, and one almost automatically makes me think of the other?

And, though I've actually finished a book by Robinson (Gilead), and never finished more than two stories by Williams, I think I prefer Williams.

Robinson seems joyless. She's apparently very tall and imposing in person. Williams seems just nutty enough to love. And invite over.

(Why I never pursued Joy Williams after reading "The Little Winter" in the 1990 Best American Short Stories—I read Padgett Powell's "Typical", and ran out to buy a book by him. I read "Typical" on a bus. I bought Typical—the collection—at the bookstore near my house after getting off the bus.)

(Madison Smartt Bell is in that collection. I've never read anything by him because I don't like the hat he's wearing in his author photo. Is that odd?)

I'm disappointed in Cynthia Ozick, who I've liked in the past. Less is not less. I quote Dylan Thomas:

"The best craftsmanship always leaves holes and gaps... so that something that is not in the poem can creep, crawl, flash or thunder in."

I think it's okay to quote that, even though it's about poetry instead of short fiction, don't you?

12:09 AM  
Blogger Gene said...

I think so.

12:31 AM  
Blogger Michael said...

I wonder if some of these critics -- Wolfe, definitely -- are motivated by class. I've only read Taking Care, but the characters are more the kind of people who would wait in line for tickets to a country-western concert than, say...go to the opera. Or whatever. I don't know what people like that do for fun.

Carver's characters were mostly working class. Mary Robison's characters are workers, service industry workers sometimes, alcoholics and drug addicts.

I think some people are used to laughing at people like that, like when they watch the Jerry Springer show so they can make fun of the guests' accents, but Williams and Robison want you to laugh with them, and I don't think people like Wolfe are willing or maybe even able to cross that line.

11:48 AM  
Blogger Tao Lin said...

themanwhocouldnt:

robinson seems joyless to me too

i can imagine us hanging out and me trying to make jokes and she getting offended and then ditching me in some shopping mall or something

i need to edit this post... so she had five stories in best american in this collection

it's hard to imagine joy williams getting into best american nowadays

it seems like everything has been mainstream'ed ... with michael chabon editing the next one and all

that madison smartt bell photo makes me want to read his books so that i can make fun of him with authority

about dylan thomas, i like what frederick barthelme said better (see above); the same thing, meaning-wise, i guess; but i feel like i can actually talk to frederick barthelme, whereas if dylan thomas came up to me and said that i would feel embarrassed

michael:

maybe

though Wolfe would probably never admit it

whatever the reason, it's stupid

i feel that expressing hatred for a work of fiction is the same as expressing hatred for a person; if you're doing it, you're just not thinking hard enough or trying hard enough to understand

also, you can have 'favorites' or you can 'like' something, but you should do it with the knowledge that what is your 'favorite' is not the 'best'

there is no 'best'

it's idiotic and mindless to ever use the words 'best' or 'better' or 'worst' when talking about fiction

one time i saw Dale Peck outside the sunshine cinema, walking along, at night, alone, and he had this grin on his face

by the way

3:37 PM  
Blogger Tao Lin said...

i'm deleting all comments by impersonators

the person pretending to be both sarah strickley and me at the same time

if you want to call me a piece of shit or say that i'm a worthless son of a bitch, or whatever, i'm okay with that, just don't impersonate anyone... because that's bad; you're taking someone's identity and acting with it, getting bad or good credit for it

and then when the real owner of that identity goes out into the world, people will react against the identity in a way that the owner of it does not deserve and has no causal relation to; sort of like when calves are born as a by product of milk-cows having to be pregnant all the time, and who are then put in the dark where they can't move and fed liquid feed and then killed for veal

they didn't ask for it; they don't deserve it

so if you want to call me a shithead or whatever, please, i encourage you; just don't impersonate anymore, please

4:38 PM  
Blogger Karin said...

I read Honored Guest last night, the version printed in the 1995 Best American Short Stories, which I bought a few months ago at a garage sale for 50 cents.

I enjoyed the story very much, but in light of your previous discussion about minimalism vs. maximalism, and using symbols/metaphors vs. not using them (I think that's what you were saying?), I wanted to ask -- in your opinion, is Joy Williams a minimalist or a maximalist? In any case, Honored Guest in fact uses a very heavy metaphorical scene.

The girl, Helen, goes to a salon to get a haircut, to please her dying mother Lenore. The woman cutting her hair, a descendent from an aboriginal Japanese tribe, who proceeds to tell Helen a story about how her tribe revered bears -- how they would nurse it with human milk, keep it caged but treated like an honored guest no less, only to slaughter it brutally in an act of ritual sacrifice.

When I started reading this scene, I thought to myself, okay... here's what the story is all about... better pay attention...

I'm not quite sure how to get around this 'problem' (the problem being heavy-handed metaphor).

Now, the scene was essential because it communicated the theme/meaning of the story, and it's a wonderful message to take away. I can't say I ever thought about my life in those terms exactly, but it makes sense: Better enjoy life while the good times last, because inevitably, dying will catch up with you. And when it does, you will suffer and eventually die, and when you do, its darkness for eternity.

So, if I can accept that a heavy-handed metaphor such as this is necessary, then I might accept that people do go through life looking for symbols that relate to their own plights -- (referencing your initial post).

I think I do this. I think sometimes I view my life like it's an unfolding story. This has been a tough year for several of my friends -- luckily, not for me -- but I've internalized their plights and analyzed how they apply to my own self-growth. I've learned lessons through their hardships.

Which is what the character Helen did, I think. She had been floating through the story, trying to make sense of her mother's dying, and even though we don't see it happen, we can assume the hair stylist's anecdote resonated with her. We see this just before the final scene, when Helen tells Lenore that she loves her. It was the first time in the story Helen expressed anything positive, which is subtle and beautiful. It demonstrated growth without actually telling us that she had grown.

Then, in the final scene, the bus driver says, "I lost my mother at your age, you just have to hang in there." This is also the point of the story. He gave this advice in such a mundane, everyday manner. It's deceptively callous. But when her girlfriend babbles on about her own death experiences, you know the bus driver was right, and you trust Helen knows he was right. It was a very good ending.

This brings me to the "less is less" discussion. I often think that "less is less", but this opinion comes from my experience in workshops. Often I read stories that merely skirt the surface of the deeper themes beneath, and arent't very thought-provoking to boot. The stories read as shallow and dull and mechanical. I remember a woman who turned in a story containing only dialogue. It was awful. One person, in her defense said, "I read a Hemingway story that was all dialogue." Until someone else said, "No offense, but she's not Hemingway."

Ultimately, I think every writer needs to find their own voice to express whatever it is they are trying to express. Don't emulate a certain form or ideal such as 'minimalism' -- just do whatever works for you and see how other people react. I overwrite sometimes, so I rely on my peers to point out when I'm doing to so. Then I cut it back. You just need to learn how to strike the balance that works.

10:21 AM  
Blogger Tao Lin said...

Karin:

about minimalism vs. maximalism...

ideally, i will never have those words in my head; instead just look at each text as its own unique thing

i used the label 'kmart realism' so much on this site because i think it's funny for something to be called 'kmart realism'

actually, to me, one of the few things the 'kmart realists' have in common is that i like them all

i don't think honored guest is metaphorical... or rather, the metaphor is explicit (the daughter herself thought something like, to live is to be an honored guest) and therefore still like in 'real life'

the other kind of metaphorical story is where the author stands sort of outside of the story and arranges things for proper metaphorical resonance (subtle, etc.), where none of the characters themselves realize the metaphor...

to me, that is not like real life...

to me, the metaphor in honored guest was not heavy-handed, but rather 'real' because the character herself realizes the metaphor and thinks about it... and in that way, the story is not contrived to contain the metaphor, the 'meaning' of the story is not in that metaphor, but in the character's thoughts about the metaphor; therefore the author is not trying to 'teach' anything or even get any 'message' across, which i like

i think writers have two choices only

if they want to write to satisfy themselves, they should write what they want to / like to read

if they want to write to satisfy themselves by way of satisfying others (by way of fame or money) then they should write what the highest number of others will want to / like to read

neither one is 'better,' and there's overlap and whatever... and i guess the second kind of writer is usually happier (the first kind usually the writer is miserable and dies alone and depressed), and in the end, anyway, we are all doomed

8:03 PM  
Blogger Tao Lin said...

i just think that 'less is less' is a vague, inaccurate, superficial statement

does it mean that less psychology is less meaning; less words in a sentence is less psychology; less adverbs and adjectives is less psychology (less insight into the psychology of the author) and therefore less meaning; less time elapsed for number of words used is less action and therefore more psychology; or what?

it's just too vague to say 'less is less'

8:12 PM  
Blogger Karin said...

A few brief comments:

"i don't think honored guest is metaphorical... or rather, the metaphor is explicit (the daughter herself thought something like, to live is to be an honored guest) and therefore still like in 'real life'

the other kind of metaphorical story is where the author stands sort of outside of the story and arranges things for proper metaphorical resonance (subtle, etc.), where none of the characters themselves realize the metaphor...

to me, that is not like real life..."

I agree with this, but also, what Williams did is sort of trick -- it's like she wanted to do what you expressed in the latter, but did what you expressed in the former just to sneak it in there without relying on traditional means.

Sometimes I like the latter better because it's less obvious. With Honored Guest, I couldn't escape the feeling that I was being told what the metaphor was -- the scene was so HUGE, and the punchline is the title of the story, etc.

~

Also:

"i think writers have two choices only

if they want to write to satisfy themselves, they should write what they want to / like to read

if they want to write to satisfy themselves by way of satisfying others (by way of fame or money) then they should write what the highest number of others will want to / like to read "

I don't agree with this at all. I think the writer should write whatever it is they are trying to express, and if it so happens that the means they use to express themselves does not conform with what society deems as popular or marketable, then so be it. But if the writer happens to have a style and a voice that is marketable, then good for them.

But I'm not going to compare myself to either lot. I'm just going to keep reading, and analyze what's good and bad about the writing, and try to absorb those principles into my own work.

4:08 PM  
Blogger Rebecca said...

Just to weigh in on "Honored Guest"--the bear metaphor was, to this reader, the least interesting part of that story. The dialogue between mother and daughter, on the other hand, was funny, cruel, heartbreaking.

5:42 AM  
Blogger Fairy Tale Review said...

We're printing a 30th anniversary edition of The Changeling. I finished reading the galley proof last week. This is a classic, completely overlooked. Advance copies will be available in January. Let me know if you're interested in a copy and I'll see what I can do.

Andy, Ass't. Ed.

2:02 AM  

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